Hi,
I will try something new and I made some podcasts – I am reading some of my poems. I like your feedback.:-) Thanks, Milou
Podcast The Snake :
Its scales reflect the evilness
Black, empty eyes do not confess
Its hiss is ironing my foot
I can’t move, I stuck, like a root
This snake that I’m describing now
Is slithering to me, and makes me frown
This time I know it, my death is near
And down my spine go goose bumps of fear
But when I look a bit closer at it
I note, it’s actually a snake of plastic
……….more snake poems——–>
snake, snakes, most poisonous snake, most dangerous snake,0
snake, snakes, most poisonous snakes, most dangerous snake,0
scary!
lol pretty cool
but like a plastic toy snake cant usually slither towards you
your poems are really good : ) i read a few to my daughter and she absolutely loved them. Her teacher reads her poems from a book called Poems for Children to Enjoy – And Teachers Too! by Eleanor McLeod. (you can find a copy of it in ebook form at BooksOnBoard.com you might like it….some of the poems in there remind me of these. keep writing! : )
Imaginative, creative and your inflection while reading was absolutely superb! Let your folks see my poetry before you visit my site. Keep up the fabulous work.
Peace and joy…The Mad Celt
nice
I love the way you project your voice. You are a very talented lady.
Pattie from
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i like your poem…good one…